#frapalymo – Liquid Thoughts and Solid Changes

Liquid Thoughts

fleeting thoughts flow
a torrential river
staring at murky images
wavering in the mirror
human melts into
a monstrous form
creating distorted reality
blood shoots through veins
screaming for liquid
starving the human
to feed the monster

Solid Changes

solid form changes
from lack of sustenance
slowly fading away
thoughts solidify distorted reality
losing humanity
in the solid belief
that the monster is real
staring at the image
as it screams
don’t give in
just a little longer
a few more inches
the monster will finally
be human

#frapalymo is hosted by @FrauPaulchen and is translated by Bee on her blogs The Bee Writes and Just Fooling Around With Bee. I ended up doing two days in one since I’m jumping on this band wagon a little late. Luckily, I picked a double prompt. Yesterday’s prompt was “liquid” and today’s prompt is “solid.” I wanted to play with the ideas of liquid and solid and how everything isn’t what it seems when we look in the mirror and see ourselves. I know I’ve spent too much of my life seeing a monster rather than the beautiful woman I have always been.



8 thoughts on “#frapalymo – Liquid Thoughts and Solid Changes

  1. It’s good that you let the monster go and see the beautiful woman. Thanks so much for taking part and as you know. It’s supposed to be fun, not a chore. So do as many or as less you want to and can. Love the poems 🙂

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  2. Pingback: English #frapalymo in November 15 ~ No 4 | Just Fooling Around With Bee

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