Monday’s Finish the Story – Life on the Streets


She lived a life that some would describe as being on edge.

Avery spent cold nights in dark alleys under cardboard boxes and scrounged for food in overflowing dumpsters, surprised at the wealth of so much waste. It wasn’t all good, but if it didn’t make her sick, she reckoned it was good enough for her.

As she walked down the dim alley looking for a place to sleep, her belly grumbled. It had been a few days. Sighing, she continued walking, eyes scanning every nook and cranny, constantly alert.

Catching a glint on the pavement, Avery bent down and picked up two pieces of change. She scanned them front and back for good measure, but was amazed to realize she had found not one, but two buffalo nickels.

Whooping in delight, she changed course and headed to the pawn shop, hoping food was in her near future.

Monday’s Finish the Story is a unique flash fiction challenge where we provide you with a new photo each week, and the first sentence of a story. Your challenge is to finish the story using 100-150 words, not including the sentence provided. Click on the froggy link to read other stories or upload your own.

My story is coming in at 148 words today. I get that it isn’t a true look into life on the streets and I have no idea what two buffalo nickels will get someone at a pawn shop, but hopefully it’s enough to buy dinner for a hungry street kid. I hope you enjoy.

Happy Monday!



10 thoughts on “Monday’s Finish the Story – Life on the Streets

  1. They are collectors items, this is what I found on line:
    “As of 2015, the value of a buffalo nickel was at least 10 cents, making it more valuable than a regular nickel. The value of buffalo nickels ranges from about $3.50 for a 1913 Type 1 up to about $3,600 for an uncirculated 1926 S coin.”
    So it all depends on the date on the coins!

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  2. What a delightful short story. What a find for someone who is hungry and no place to go for comfort.
    Thanks for sharing your beautiful talent. Love you sweet girl!!

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